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Todd's avatar

I enjoyed both stories today. Glad I'm not a treasure seeking adventurer - I would never want to find a drooling treasure chest! It was interesting reading the back story of On Golden Wings. There are still gaps in the story that will allow you to roll this into a highly entertaining saga! Keep up the good writing!

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Anthony Lora's avatar

Lisa was lucky the mimic was incompetent. 😅

I'm definitely looking forward to fleshing out everyone's story from OGW. Picking where to go from next is going to be a challenge! Thanks for reading!

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Debbie's avatar

Another great job with both stories Anthony!

I think your development of ‘On Golden Wings’ should be ongoing. You have a lot you could build on and it’s always fun reading an ongoing saga!

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Anthony Lora's avatar

Thank you! There'll definitely be more. It's just a matter of 'when', rather than 'if.' 😁

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